Dark as Knight

So I read the whole comic on your doomdojo.com website (up to "Harsh Lessons" part 2) and it's not bad. The overall artwork is pretty good (action scenes, camera angles, color). I see that it was influenced by Naruto and some DragonBall Z influences in a chibi-manga style. I like the small injection of rhetorical questions asked and the added self-referential humor to help break up the pace of the comic a bit. Well done. I do have a few critiques though. Why is Billy named Tubby? Is he fat? The order of which characters speak in the thought bubbles were a little confusing at times. Perhaps you can have the bubbles overlap each other in a top-left to top-right, then bottom-left to bottom-right pattern, so it's easier for the reader to follow. Also just like my comic, maybe you can have a link in the description of each page to go to the next page of your comic. I'm aware the uploading to DeviantArt is a little messy, but having a posted link to the next page will make it easier to read your comic on DeviantArt. Overall, I like the balance of narrative and action in your comic. I understand the storyline and the student-teacher/martial-arts/demon theme is intriguing. I look forward to more in the future!